Saturday, March 27, 2010

Finally, Is It, Cough, Time, To Stop Smoking?

Recycled Weekend
June 12, 2009

watching when little
on the big screen
larger than life
macho men
pretty women
a spark then a light
smoke from the lips
one likes to be
just like the heroes
want to be like him

cowboys on the range
ruggedly handsome
the wild west vision
horses and cattle
night time glow
almost perfect
want to be like him

puff on the pipe
by jove I've got it
the game is a foot
come watson
want to be like him

school years beckon
all grown up
james dean look
one hangs from the lip
be like your friends
want to be like him

Bogart black and white hat and raincoat
in the shadows
roll your own
tug on the ear
oh so rugged
want to be like him

people are dying
holes in throat
lungs are blackened
can't breathe anymore
gasping for air
all a lie
image was built
cartoon and macho
trick them all
hook the children
replace the dying
tough to look cool
when you lay so still
not to be like him

4 comments:

middle child said...

I am a smoker and I think this post is excellent!

raydenzel1 said...

middle child
Thanks, I don't remember what inspired the poem, but I remembered being influenced by what I saw in the movies and on TV.

Christine Macdonald said...

Smoking used to be Fashion. Now it's just Filthy.

Great poem.

raydenzel1 said...

Christine
thanks. I wait for inspiration each day. This was a good day I think.

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