from moondustwriter
Excellent poem about a hopeless condition
My heart breaks for these children. Death sadly is a blessing
My heart breaks for these children. Death sadly is a blessing
from V.Mafood
Seeing the horror these children endure makes my blood run cold. It is beyond heartless. I will tell the author about your comment! Thanks!
from songnwoods
Very moving and tragic words...a reality still, in this part of the world too.
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October 10, 2010 2:35 PMOctober 8, 2010 11:56 AMOctober 8, 2010 11:22 AM
(Note: This photograph showing a starving Sudanese child being stalked by a vulture won Kevin Carter the 1994 Pulitzer Prize for feature photography.)
why oh why
what have I done
to be in a place
where there
is no hope
no food
no drink
all alone
so young
no future
no past
can't understand
forsaken
gift to mankind
possibilities
unlimited
doctor
scientist
cruelty of mankind
starvation
dying of thirst
cruelty of nature
cruelty of man
food and water
everywhere
not here
never enough
hunger constant
thirst constant
suffering constant
future is dim
I am forsaken
what have I done
death is near
end the suffering
R. J. Denzel
R. Jacob Post Poetic Muses
2 comments:
Congrats on being a guest poet. I know it's one of your passions, so it's nice to know that you have the forum to share it with others.
BTW - I like the new look :)
Travel
It is good to her comments from other people, good or bad. I never know if my writing is good or not.
Pink for October for the cause. Back to my red in November!
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